7月17日雅思大作文真题 | 外教原创高分范文+范文解析+范文朗读:广告的主要目的

发布于 2021-07-18 19:45




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上题:


The main aim of advertising is to increase the sales of products that people do not really need

To what extent do you agree or disagree?



-- 题目分析 --



题目分析:


Type: Opinion (disagree, but with exception)

  • Body 1: The main goal of business is profit, and advertising is a tool to deliver that profit. “Creating a need”

  • Body 2: The majority of consumer products are needed, as shown by Maslow.







- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -


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-- Essay Analysis 范文解析 --


-- (1) Introduction --



Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question:
  • The main aim of = the over-arching goal of

  • advertising = advertisements

  • to increase = increasingly

  • sales of products = purchase products (from different angles)

  • people = consumers

  • do not really need = unneeded


Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay:
  • There are those that believe

  • There is no doubt that 

  • ; however, I disagree with the premise that considers


Words showing Cohesion (C&C):
  • There

  • ; however,


Vocabulary:

  • over-arching 整体的

  • consumables 消费品;消耗品



-- (2) Body 1 --


Aspects that must be referred to:
  • main aim of advertising is to increase the sales of products 



Standard IELTS essay phrase:
  • It is clear that the main reason for … is
  • some people believe
 
Vocabulary and Collocations:
  • revenue 收益;营业额
  • be generated 产生
  • profit 利润
  • be obtained 获得
  • It suffices to state then, that 这足以说明
  • is part and parcel 不可或缺的组成部分
  • revenue growth 营业额增长
  • place advertisements 投放广告
  • the public domain 公共领域;公有领域
  • precisely how
 
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C)
  • , of course,(interjection)
  • By doing this, (cause)
  • , all companies infact, (interjection)
  • , and thus, (effect)
  • , that (connective)
  • , for without it,(contrast)
  • , as being able to(reason)
  • , and hopefully(interjection)


-- (3) Body 2 --


Aspects that must be referred to:

  • products that people do not really need



Standard IELTS essay phrase:
  • As to whether


Vocabulary and Collocations:
  • indispensable 不可或缺的

  • a contentious issue 有争议的问题

  • to discern 识别;分辨

  • to evaluate 评估

  • Maslow’s ‘Hierarchy of Needs’ 马斯洛的需求层次理论

  • highly pertinent 高度相关


Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C)
  • As to whether,(signposting connective)

  • , however, (contrast)

  • Absolutely (emphatic interjection)

  • And (connective)

  • This is especially true if (referencing + hypothetical)

  • When (conditional)

  • what is a need and what is not, so… (showing dichotomy)

  • , for example, (example)

  • Who (referencing)



-- (4) Conclusion --



Standard IELTS essay phrase:
  • In conclusion,

  • there is no doubt that

  • , I disagree that


Vocabulary and Collocations:
  • plays a critical role in 在……种扮演着重要的作用

  • commodity 商品;货物;日用品


Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C)
  • through (how)

  • allowing (effect)

  • ; however, (contrast)

  • , and in fact,(interjection)




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